2021.01.08 daily english study log

today i watched the video about how to improve essay skill.

the video name is "how to write a good essay:parapharasing the question" of Learning English with Emma

in this video emma shows 3 tips for good essay

first, she says that changes the words with synonyms.

many student use the same words of the question.

but it is not essay, just a copy.

in the essay, we should prove our writing skill like logic and expression ability.

so the most eaist method is changing the word to synonyms.

she use the example about educations.

the sentence was the education is the most important factor in development of country.

she introduce how to parapharase and meaning of that.

the parapharasing means that changes the word to synonyms.

in this sentence, education can be changed to schooling,

we can use the word 'essential' instead of important, and element instead of factor

plus, we can change the word 'development' to advancement.

as a result we can get paraphrased secentence,

the schooling is the most essential element in advancement of country.

next, she talked about two tips, changing the structure of  scentence and show anothor opinion using concessions.

there are too many thing to write here,

so, i want to stop today's english writing.